29.3 (Poetry adorns the beginning of this story and the end)
If my eyes should ever fall on Milarepa's nettle pot the very shape of the earthenware pot that broke- a relic they still keep at Tashi Lhunpo of the instant he knew he had a pot and didn't have a...
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You had me anticipating the word pot in the last line. Wonderful repetition. Fun to read out loud
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youknow, I didn't even realize I'd said it four times. Two, I knew about.
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Alison, everything is perfect* here, from title to the tip of its (stinger) (tail). Send it somewhere nice.*except maybe closing up that opening parenthesis
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Hey, my comments are disappearing! I dittoed Hadley. I like the missing "pot"--and pot/poetry.
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